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Racing Rivalrys Part 1 by ~33482:icon33482:



It was a nice day in Rockfall, Lepra was driving around the city with his car and was as cool as always. Together with Lepra was his Girlfriend Alex and his Friends Nick, Shonik and Sonia which were driving in their own cars. Noone was thinking something bad until they reached some crossroads... Lepra just noticed something coming from the right but it was too late to react already... A big crushnoise forecd Lepra and his guys to stop... Lepra got out of his car and saw that it was totally damaged. Lio, who was driving the other car, got out too and shouted ,,ARE YOU CRAZY?'' Lepra shouted back ,,NO, BUT I THINK YOU ARE!''. Lio laughed, ,,Sure... i hit your car because i like to fix the damage my car gets then...'' The others were walking to Lepra and asked him if he was ok, he nodded, Lio said ,,Hey, is that your Fanclub?'' he chuckled after he said that.Lepra, who was really pissed right now, said ,,No, it's my racingcrew! They would own you every second'' Lio stared at them while they all nodded and made an evil smile. Lio said ,,OK... why don't we find out if that is true... I want to see you tonight at the mall...'' Lepra laughed and said ,,You dare to force US?'' Lio just smirked and said back ,,Oh... you're afraid?'' Lepras ambition made him say ,,No, we will be there! And now get out of our sight...'' Lio made an evil smile and was driving home to fix his car. Later that day his friend Sunrise came by and noticed that Lio was kinda pissed. ,,Are you ok?'' he asked Lio, ,,Yeah, i'm fine! I'm just having a race tonight...'' Sunrise asked more. ,,Is it a race against that Lepradude?'' Lio nodded. Suddenly Amber ,Lio's girlfriend, came in the room. ,,Hey you 2!'' she said with a cute smile on her face ,,How are you?'' Sunrise said ,,we are ok but Lio is racing tonight'' Amber was kinda scared and excited at the same time.  ,,A race? Oh please watch out that nothing happens to you!'' Lio hugged her and promised to her that he will watch out. At the night the 3 were waiting at the mall until they saw many cars with lots of people were driving by. Lio noticed Lepra getting out of a car and walked over to him ,,What are thoose people doing here?'' he asked. Lepra just answered ,,They are here to see me win!'' Alex were walking to Lepra and put one of her arms around him and said ,,I'm surprised you even showed up here...'' Lepra laughed and Lio was crossing his arms. ,,We will see who will win... but why are we still here and talk? Let's race!'' Lio said and got in his car. Lepra said ,,Ok, the first at the trainstation wins!'' Lio nodded and was driving to the startingline Alex kissed Lepra and said ,,Have fun with that loser!'' Lepra just smiled and said ,,I will!''. Amber walked to Lios car and kissed him ,,Please watch out! I don't want you to get hurt!'' Lio smiled at Amber and answered ,,Hey, i will watch out! That's what i promised to you!'' The starter gave the sign and then 2 cars were racing through the city towards to the trainstation. The race was fast and dangerous but Lio won it. After the race Lepra walked to Lio and said ,,You were just lucky... i will get my revenge! Tomorrow evening at the stadium!'' Lio just laughed and said ,,OK! And bring some of your luck with you next time too!''. The following days were full of races between Lio and Lepra, but Lio never gave Lepra a chance to win a race. After Lio won for the 12th time Lepra was full of rage and shouted at him after the race when everyone was around ,,OK LIO... ONE LAST RACE! I WANT TO MEET YOU IN THE BLACKWATER-CANYON! WE WILL SEE WHO IS THE BETTER DRIVER THERE!'' Everyone was shocked. Nick said ,,Hey... that is suicide!'' Shonik and Sonia agreed. Alex said ,,Lepra... please don't do that! It's too dangerous!''. Amber said the same to Lio. Sunrise walked over to Lio and said ,,Lio... don't do that! The blackwater-Canyon is dangerous! Only one moment without paying attention and you will fall down at least 100 metres to your death!'' Lio listened to them but agreed because he was too pride to say no, so he agreed with Lepra. So next evening many people came to the Canyon to see the Final showdown between Lepra and Lio. Lepras crew, Amber, and Sunrise were waiting worried at the bottom of the Canyon near the finish-line. After the race started Lio immediatly getting in the first position. He even made jokes about Lepra by slowing down some times to show ,,Hey... c'mon slowly boy!'' that made Lepra so angry that he was hitting Lios car in the back when he did that in the last 200 metres before they reached the finish-line. Lio was shocked and accidently moved the steering wheel in the wrong direction so the car was falling down the canyon. Everyone was shocked seeing that, Lepra won the race but they all payed attention to Lios car. Amber was shouting Lios name but all they saw was an Explosion down the Canyon...
©2009-2010 ~33482
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Author's Comments

To be continued...

Lepra::iconojamalio:

Alex::icontomboydaisy:

Shonik, Nick and Sonia::iconshinmera:

Amber::iconmrsedwardcullen-12:

Lio and Sunrise::icon33482:

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Epicness.

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Are you reading this?
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Thanks a lot!^^

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Fehler: Shonik nicht Shonil (im kommentar)
Coole Geschichte, nicht schlecht :D

Was mir am ehesten aufgefallen ist: Diese Geschichte braucht meeeeeeeeehr Adjektive! Mehr beschreibungen. Im moment wirkt es ein bisschen zusammengedrückt.

Aber sonst hast du eine interessante Geschichte geschrieben! Kompliment! :thumbsup:

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Danke! Ok das behebe ich gkeich!^^ Und wegen der Adjektive, hey das is mein erstlingwerk!^^

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Ja, ich finde nur man sollte immer etwas kritik abgeben, ist ja das einzige was einem hilft besser zu werden! :)

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You live your life and the only thing you can ever do is to try.
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Da haste recht!^^

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No problem.

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Nette Geschichte^^

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Im Glasgarten verirrtt sich die Zeit und bleibt als Moment erhalten!
Ob sie wohl leben? Sie werfen keine Schatten nur gebrochene Bilder!
Nur der Mond weist den Weg zum Morgen erlaubt der Sonne einen neuen Tag!
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Hast du sie auch verstanden?^^

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Ich Lebe nach der 10-A-Regel: [link] ^^
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Ja aber manches war echt schwer für ´mich zu übersetzen bin ja nicht so gut wie du ^^

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Im Glasgarten verirrtt sich die Zeit und bleibt als Moment erhalten!
Ob sie wohl leben? Sie werfen keine Schatten nur gebrochene Bilder!
Nur der Mond weist den Weg zum Morgen erlaubt der Sonne einen neuen Tag!

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